Lunar Eclipse

I loved this! Although it's not in a given location I found it quite brilliant - I have to agree w/ the changes suggested and the edits you made. I ...

I really liked the poem! I think my favorite lines were: framed by hopeless attempts at chocolate kisses ending with misery and thrown-away wrappers There is no silver lining here. ...

Hey! Loved the poem, I think it's good and you could try more poetry in the future. [if you do, let me know because I'd love to read it!] I'd ...

Aw, I feel so bad for the toothbrush! This is, like, a guilttrap or something - I'm going to be afraid to throw away toothbrushes for awhile now.... This makes ...

Okay, for the first thing, I

Okay, I liked this, and I lurve your title. I'm not sure if I've got the meaning right but what I got out of it was it's someone who knows ...

Well, I must agree with previous posts, that was extremely suspenseful, and I loved the ending - absolutely *not* what I'd been expecting! I've never seen "Saw" so I wouldn't ...

This is amazing, I've been through this before - and the other girl was one of my best friends, too. But I'm over *that* guy now. [was not worth the ...

My goodness. What a turn. But he said she would be his soon? What what? Is this some evil plot of his? I certainly hope Ellen and the Marquis wind ...

Ooh, I absolutely loved this - your characters are very well defined, kudos on that. I especially like the way the Marquis is so charming and she hates his guts...and ...

I absolutely loved this piece, it especially struck a chord with me because I've experienced something similar. I only saw a few spelling issues, which could be fixed pretty easily. ...

Ooh. Okay. I'm not the best at critiquing poetry, but...I really liked this poem! Umm...I can't think of much to say other than what has already been said, my emphasis ...

Hey! I liked the poem, and the concept, but it seems rather plain. You could probably revise it to make it more appealing to editors. There wasn't much imagery, just ...

This story was really well written! It was an interesting concept, definitely - the idea was very original, plus, I loved your approach. Madison and Lonnie are friends? At first ...

I really liked this poem - I found it easy to relate to, and I think you conveyed the message well. I loved the way you repeated parts of stanza ...